peer revision

Thanks to the peer revision I was able to see things from a different point of view as to how my topic looked and how on topic I was. I think looking at all the different possibilities for good writing to my paper would make it better. Such as which parts are really the attention getters? Which paragraphs need more improvement. It helps to know if I'm over thinking the process as well. It's important to me to know the point I'm trying to get across is clear and I have good grammar. The revision is still very helpful and is better than no revision at all. I personally like the revision process and how it can help open your eyes up to things you missed before.